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So I Said to Myself, Self...

Wed Dec 2, 2009, 6:26 PM
Never post anything before you read over it at least twice. Changed Damon's last name to Kerr, but forgot to change all of it, so the chapter randomly refers to Forsythe throughout and only mentions Kerr in one random spot.

Forsythe is much too cool a name for someone who commits genocide. Hopefully prose is acceptable compared to poetry. Assignment due in the next... five hours? But I finished every chapter up to Anamnesis and I can't stop writing.

Who keeps downloading my word vomit? You stop. Go read something worthwhile.

Speaking of vomit...

Too Cute
My love, I cannot bear to look at you,
You're just too cute. I fear it's true

Your very image sears my eyes
I promise you I speak no lies

Bile rising, I start to shake,
You're too sweet for me to take

There must be something I can do
So I can bear to look at you

Yet I know what the solution is,
My stomach churns and starts to fizz

I don't blame you for what you are,
It's just your beauty I must mar

Please forgive me! I'm not strong!
I've kept this in for far too long

This gift of vomit I endow
I can look upon you now

  • Mood: Llama
  • Listening to: Bye Bye Beautiful ~ Nightwish
  • Watching: Thirteenth Warrior
  • Eating: Phoenician
  • Drinking: Xenergy

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:iconphantomseptember:
Thanks for the watch. :)

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What may this mean, that thou, dead corpse, again, in complete steel revisit'st thus the glimpses of the moon?
Hamlet - Act I
:iconxhugaddictionx:
Thanks for the fav!

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...It's all or nothing.
:iconfadedservility:
It was depressingly touching. Such victims are too often overlooked. Thank you for the post.

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They condemn what they do not understand.
:iconpaulette-lind:
Glad to see that you made it to Kazan after such a long wait in the Moscow Airport.

All the animals are bugging me. They await your return!
:iconpaikan07:
:thanks: :hug:

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One day it'll make all sense...
:iconmerzki:
Thanks for the :+fav:

:D

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Needs Coffee...
Needs More Coffee...
--Green is Love--
:iconoukan-chan:
Are you alive here?

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I don’t know why we are here, but I’m pretty sure that it is not in order to enjoy ourselves.
- Ludwig Wittgenstein
:iconlunaiy:
Thanks very much for the fave :heart:

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Long has paled that sunny sky:
Echoes fade and memories die:
Autumn frosts have slain July.
:iconelora-danen:
thanks for the fave. :)

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~Elora
:iconphantomseptember:
I love your poems! You should try to get them published, I'm serious! Get a publishing agent and get this stuff in stores! I'll buy it! *autographs too!* Seriously, you could make good money with this!

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What may this mean, that thou, dead corpse, again, in complete steel revisit'st thus the glimpses of the moon?
Hamlet - Act I

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